Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Shanti,
How are you? Hope Ramesh and Kirti are doing great. Ever since we planned our holiday I have been eagerly looking forward to it. As it’s been two years since our families met, my keenness to see you enhanced the excitement.
Unfortunately, I have to make some changes to the plan. I have been asked to attend a work related conference on the 7th & 8th of january and hence I cannot make it on the first day of our holiday. i’m sorry about this but I am sure you will understand my predicament.
However, this should not impact our holiday plan considering that we have a four day window. you can stick to your travel plan and arrive in chennai on the night of january 7. you can spend the 8th in a beach resort in Mamallapuram which is very near to chennai and join us for the rest of the holiday from the night of 8th. I will make arrangement for your resort stay and cab transfers. this resort (Blue beach resort) is a great place to soak up the sun, the sand and the sea and your family will surely relish the experience.
Again, i’m sorry about this change of plan but i’m sure you will not only understand my position but also enjoy this alternate plan. I look forward to having a great holiday with you.
Best,
Priya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...ake it on the first day of our holiday. i'm sorry about this but I am sure you wi...
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Line 21, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...idering that we have a four day window. you can stick to your travel plan and arriv...
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Line 21, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...e in chennai on the night of january 7. you can spend the 8th in a beach resort in ...
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Line 21, column 390, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...for your resort stay and cab transfers. this resort Blue beach resort is a great pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60515021459 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34853070329 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1805779464 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6428571429 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154429873165 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634284054105 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625155030977 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109867192019 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229375822396 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.