Last week yout friend looked after your children so you could attend a wedding
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- thank them for looking after the children
- describe the wedding
- invite your friend to dinner to say thank you
Dear Tina,
How are you doing today? I hope you are having a restful weekend? Anyway I need to thank you for your unconditional love towards my family and I.
Honestly, the assistance which you rendered on Saturday, 11th of May, was appreciated. If you had not looked after my children, I wouldn't have been able to attend my colleague, Jerome's wedding ceremony on the Island.
Let me describe the wedding in a bit. It took place at the Willan hall, Lagos Island and kicked off at exactly 12:00 noon. It was a huge ceremony which was attended by about 500 guests. The environment was decorated with a field of flowers which created a vivid view that was engrained on the minds of the guests.
I know you are a busy person but I would like to invite you to a dinner at the Gambia Suites, Victoria Island on the 15th of this month. So, I can get to say thank you in person.
Anyway I hope you accept my invitation and thank you for your kindness.
Your friend,
Janet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...you had not looked after my children, I wouldnt have been able to attend my colleague, ...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[2]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'to dinner'.
Suggestion: to dinner
...y person but I would like to invite you to a dinner at the Gambia Suites, Victoria Island o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, honestly, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41443703021 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2331531341 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.8461538462 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323896402673 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118385911156 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107945301648 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167521334955 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844563030983 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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