A letter to a company which is looking for help to renovate school buildings, and you want to help for it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Mirza and I am working as mechanical engineer in your company. I am writing to you to assist in renovation of school buildings in company compound.
As you are aware by records that I have applied for 30 days annual leave starting 10-02-2020 and I want to utilize these vacation by helping company in building a school. Being a mechanical engineer, I can prepare design drawings for HVAC, firefighting, and plumbing. In addition, I will supervise installation of all mechanical services inside building. I can also support you in purchasing mechanical equipment’s such as pumps and FCU’s.
As an employer of the company, it is my responsibility to contribute in developing the school for education.it also indirectly help me to refresh and boost my knowledge. I hope you will find this useful and please let me know if you want any further assistance.
Waiting for your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mirza
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20253164557 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18719120707 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664556962025 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9337289795 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301934770171 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977345038944 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894880684278 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165395857388 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04661459306 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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