Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that professional job can be obtained by having degree certificate. While there are others who think that the best way is to start working and gain experience. In my opinion, I believe that education is the best way to get desired job and success in future.
On the one hand, education play pivotal role in everyone’s life because it is the basic requirement to get professional job. In addition, companies does not encourage the candidates for interview who does not have qualification certificate. For example, to become MBBS doctor, certificate of academy and 2 years of practical experience is compulsory. Otherwise, one cannot be qualified as doctor. Moreover, there are many professional jobs as engineering and teaching which require education as a mandatory requirement.
On the other hand, some jobs such as cleaner, carpentry and plumbing does not require academic degree, but require soft skills and practical experience. Even though the start-up is easy and provide with handsome income, personal and professional growth is very low and remains stagnant. For example, people who work as a carpenter for many year does not get salary increment and promotion when compared to the educated individual. Furthermore, it is advisable to have good education background before start-up of any type of work in order to get promoted in future.
To conclude, although, soft skills and experience can get you job. It is a matter of fact that professional degree is the best way to obtain desired job. So All individuals should have education as a basic priority in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...best way to get desired job and success in future. On the one hand, education play p...
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Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
...ple, people who work as a carpenter for many year does not get salary increment and promo...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y type of work in order to get promoted in future. To conclude, although, soft skills a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19083969466 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03547197121 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5035967676 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228568787699 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823432983568 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067974247108 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164761663518 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925269038643 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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