Some people thinks that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Unqualified successful professional have raised question on grading system. While some part of demographic society believes that finishing tertiary education secures a qualified job, other modernized people hold a view that getting directly into corporate culture and gaining experience is more helpful. In my opinion, I believe that qualification is part of working system.
On one side of the argument, there are some reasons why people consider a notion that working without qualified education and getting practical knowledge is adequate. Firstly, working experience is considered more than enough instead of legal qualification. Because they might feel that goal is to get a good working place and it does not require a certification to prove their working ability and efficiency. Furthermore, some people believe that working in same field provides essential skills and that can not be achieved by just passing some exams. Therefore, they believe that practical approach is more effective.
Despite the above argument, I am of the view that educational qualification are far more important than experience. Indeed, one reason I take this position is that any graduate must have their first class educational qualification before getting into introductory step of selection procedure. Because every esteemed organization would prefer an approved qualified professional, instead of an experienced executive. In addition, certain positions need accurate measures to fulfill and it can not be left upon irresponsible education dropout. Therefore, I believe that qualified person is asset to an organization.
In conclusion, though both views are commonly held in the society, I consider that educational certificates has more values than experience notes of few years. Therefore, given this situation, it is recommended that people should finish their university education before getting in to corporate world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7649122807 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09365458261 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9439156678 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26244773413 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806720601023 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547991918991 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1577761932 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561711747334 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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