Letter1
Dear Mr Sullivan
I'm writing this letter to request for your recently announced vacancy for Spanish teachers at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London.
I have already read this job advertisement which had been posted by you in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional.
I have been teaching the Spanish language for ten years in different private and public schools in Spain. I have graduated in the same major from the best university in my country. Moreover, we have had special courses for foreign students who have immigrated to Spain, so I have experienced teaching for both Spanish and international candidates. I have just given a flying mark in IELTS exam here, and I have uploaded the certificate as you had mentioned it in your advertisement. I am going to send an email to you. You can find both my mobile and landline numbers in the attached CV. I'm always on call, and you can contact me by these numbers.
I'm impatiently looking forward to hearing from you about it. It will be a great honour for me if I can be one of the educators in your state-of-the-art institute.
Yours Faithfully,
Esmaeil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Mr Sullivan Im writing this letter to request for your...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt private and public schools in Spain. I have graduated in the same major from t...
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Line 6, column 498, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...it in your advertisement. I am going to send an email to you. You can find both my mobile and...
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Line 6, column 589, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nd landline numbers in the attached CV. Im always on call, and you can contact me ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you can contact me by these numbers. Im impatiently looking forward to hearing ...
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Line 8, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n your state-of-the-art institute. Yours Faithfully, Esmaeil
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8730964467 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99976379119 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8374156203 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.