The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in three major cities.
The line graph and table illustrate the figures of average monthly temperatures and annual hours of sunshine for London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, the average monthly temperatures for London and New York witness the same tendency, reaching the highest point in July while the figure for Sydney experience the opposite trend. In addition, amongst 3 different cities, New York has the largest hour of sunshine duration, followed by the figure for Sydney.
Looking at the line graph in more detail, in January, the average monthly temperature in Sydney is 26*C, compared to 5*C and 9*C for the 2 remaining cities, New York and London. Both the figures for London and New York reach a peak at July but New York has the slightly higher data, making the difference of 6*C. Wheares, the average monthly temperature for Sydney see a decrease of 10*C to reach the lowest point of 15*C during the same time-scale.
As we can see from the table, the total annual hours of sunshine for New York and Sydney have relatively similar, standing at 2.535 hours and 2.473 hours respectively. However, the yearly sunshine duration in London has significantly less than the 2 cities mentioned, just 1.180 hours per year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9802955665 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55456600409 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.2134531309 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.375 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267866453004 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150766326172 0.0766984524023 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127359154788 0.0603063233224 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224568197218 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137346565948 0.0580467560999 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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