a magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called ' the book that influenced me most'
Dear sir or madam
I am writing this letter in an article called which book that influenced me most in for your content magazine. That contribution, I would be the part of content of magazine and search what fascinating me to read it
The book it is about the way of life from stoicism. That explain about what we able to control and uncontrol it, for instance area of our control is emotion and kindness and act of other person or happen accident are uncontrol.
That mindset extremely helpful for every person especially who get stress from occupation, tasks, disease, and anything happen, it is more advantage to reduce disappointment, angry, and any negative emotion. When the person apply it, they can think about many ways and be wise. For instance while they want to take a testament, they will idea if getting pass or failure. I hope this ways be known-well at latest decade.
Best regard
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...son or happen accident are uncontrol. That mindset extremely helpful for every per...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...idea if getting pass or failure. I hope this ways be known-well at latest decade. B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75159235669 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5906581393 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687898089172 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.002852118 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249522564102 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085228145012 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964711646699 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165133560371 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103496854819 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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