Imprisonment is the common solution to crimes, in most countries which helps to control the behavioral act of victims involved in crimes.
While in prison a prisoner can still get some level of Education in different ways. Because Education has played some vital roles in the world at large, in one way or the other education to a prisoner will make an impact in different areas of their lives.
Educating a prisoner will as well bring out the best in them, it can as well bring change, the level of education a person gets while in prison contributes to their lives after, for example when a prisoner is educated on a lot of things like skills while in prison it helps keep their mental health stable.
However, eduction will help enlighten a prisoner while in and outside of prison, education can help a prisoner,s level of understanding, exposer and stability.
I really agree that education impacts and improve human generally.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l act of victims involved in crimes. While in prison a prisoner can still get some...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...of prison, education can help a prisoner,s level of understanding, exposer and sta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9125 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64764045897 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9864660623 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140409884692 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839136746555 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440250798237 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900930979923 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466339941196 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l act of victims involved in crimes. While in prison a prisoner can still get some...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...of prison, education can help a prisoner,s level of understanding, exposer and sta...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9125 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64764045897 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9864660623 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 76.5299724578 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 4.34317383033 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140409884692 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839136746555 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440250798237 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900930979923 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466339941196 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.