Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Write a letter to Mrs Barratt. In your letter
suggest how you could help her in her home
say why you would like to do this work
explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barratt,
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement for help in next summer season. While reading newspaper I found advertisement related to home chores help require in next summer for few hours twice in a week.
Moreover, I would be obliged to help you in your home chores. To cite an example, nurturing and watering to the plants in garden as well as taking care your pet. Furthermore, I have also completed Electrical equipment repairing training, owning to this, I can fix all your house lights, fans as well as all electrical instruments.
I have been looking for same type of opportunity since long to help someone with my skills, it would be very beneficial for my further career. If I would be able to help, you’re in your home chores, It would give immense feeling for me and in future also I may contribute to the society enhancement.
As I am still working as trainee. Consequently, I may offer my services on week end only, so I can provide assistance between 9:30 AM 4:30 PM. Apart from that, I need to focus on my further study on fulfill my dream in technical field.
It would be grateful, if you may reply to this letter. Accordingly, I will manage my other priority.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... contribute to the society enhancement. As I am still working as trainee. Conseque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71559633028 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77203926136 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6096117764 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 4.34317383033 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281065089724 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962081031233 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104206501399 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144716111889 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102546376142 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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