A night club just opened near where you live. You are very unhappy about the situation because it disturbs the peace of the neighborhood. Write a letter to your local government official. Say who you are and explain why you are unhappy and suggest what should be done about it
To whom it may concern
I'm a Northern village resident. In last friday our village consult informs a piece of disturbing news that the government intended to open a nightclub inside the community area. Me and my family are unhappy receiving that news, because, nightclub will affect our living quality.
here is a small and quiet community, most of the residents living here have young children and many elderly people. Their lives are very regular. If the government plan to build the nightclub in this community they really afraid will break down this peace zone. As they know nightclub always cause many problems such as noise, violence, drunk people, even more, a security problem.
The committee of the community will hold a meeting to discuss " How residents protect the value of their life, keep quiet and peaceful environment ". this meeting will be next friday, they really hope the city consult can send someone to join this meeting and listen to what the peoples voice and need. Please take the matter into your immediate attention to this matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...will affect our living quality. here is a small and quiet community, most of...
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...ople, even more, a security problem. The committee of the community will hold...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08938547486 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35369964111 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2821300331 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737823458964 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321302492018 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276478098261 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376186624946 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273267670273 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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