Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
These days, almost countries produce the big amount of garbage every year, which detrimentally affect the enviroment. The main reason for this situation is behavioural people, therefore governments have to find some solutions to solve this problem.
In modern life, people produce more and more rubbish, because they consume more goods than in the past. This lead to many bottles, cans and packages that are thrown away. Eventually, the amount of rubbish is increasing and most people are not aware of this situation. Moreover, wasting also contributes to create garbage. For example, many families buy many foods but they cannot use all the foods or they remove something they are using to buy some new things they like. The main second reason is change in people’s thinking. They like convenience so they will prioritize to use something once and thrown it away such as plastic bags. The bags are trash that causes environmental polution.
There are some solutions governments should do to reduce the amount of garbage. Firstly, governments need to raise awareness of rubbish in the general public. Children should be educated about environment and adults need to know how to consume products efficiently. Furthermore, governments should encourage citizens to use recycled products to protect environment.
In conclusion, the amount of rubbish is a problem governments are considering. However, if everyone realises some solutions, the problem would be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44347826087 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84038190675 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.853697953 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.25 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213733463789 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674807067723 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790416392975 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111684536567 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196376553862 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.