The number of car accidents that occur on a daily basis is massive. In your opinion, what are three common causes of motor vehicle accidents?
Everyday, hundred of road traffic accident occur, cause so much suffering for yourself anf for others. The rate of casualties from traffic accidents is increase day by day. May be there are more than 10 motor vehicle-related deaths per day. There are variety of reasons cause road accident. Often, drivers are distracted by many things while behind the wheel, or drink alcohol before they drive and usually drive with high speed is very dangerous.
The first reason I have to mention is distracted driving. The driver can be distracted by others factor like phone ring or phone messages, rain, food, drink...These are seem normal but it is very dangerous to multitasking while driving. This reasonis the most common reason, and can be cause more traffic accident than any other reasons.
In addition, drunk driving is another major cause of accidents. When people drive after consuming alcohol, their ability to focus on the road can be hugely decrease and lead to cause accident. Alcohol make people feel tired, cognitive impairment, and can not afford to concentrate on driving. Just a small amount of alcohol can make you tipsy. Let’s avoid alcohol if you need to go out. If you have consumed alcohol yet, do not driving to protect yourself ang others.
Last but not least, high speed may cause many serious accident. When you over the limit allowed, you can not control speed and unable to handle unexpected situations. And with the high limit, the degree of collision is huge and cause serious injury for not only yourself but also another.
In conclution, when you in traffic, it is not simple, it is your life and also others. Just focus on the road, do not be distracted, do not consume alcohol, and drive drive within the permissible speed. These are just three common reasons, there are still many others reasons so please learn how to drive and protect others life is protect your life. Do not subjective while you are in the road.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Every day
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Suggestion: seemed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.48453608247 281% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 332.0 206.0 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8765060241 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43911749709 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 290.88556701 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8853144656 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0952380952 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 1.49484536082 870% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116685941958 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361792374116 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434297942829 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661128223784 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420469825487 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.