what are the causes of dropping out of colledge?
When we left high school, we usually have many choice, especially, continue with university or dropping out. If we go on studying, we can have the brighter future, get more knowledge and apply for good job. How about dropping out of college? What causes of many people decide drop out and then start working? There are many reasons especially can not afford to pay tuition fees, feel boring and ancient tradition of many areas.
The first reason I think this is the most important and common problem is family’s economical problem. As we know, studying in the university is not simple, we have to think about fees. There a many tuition fees that need to be paid like school fees, house fees, and many others fees. So, they have to go to work, take care their family and cover life for their family. Without scholarship money, financial purposes, and unsuitable schedule for work both work and study may be forced drop out college.
In addition, not interested in learning is also a result of dropping out. Education system in high school make students feel tired, stress and boring. The environment is very important, if they feel comfortable, motivated they will work hard, but if the environment is too tight, too pressured, the easily give up and downward. And when they fell tired, they can be shocked with the lifestyle and grades at school. They can feel the do not belong at university or college and they drop out.
Last but not least, in many place, they conceive that study is not necessary, the parents just allow their kids study until graduate the high school is maximum. So, in some areas, most of people marriage and have kids at the age of 15 to 16. And drop out are considered naturally.
In conclusion, there are are many reasons for dropping out problems like financial affordable, not interested in learning, and too old tradition. But I think, study is the best and suitable way to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 5.05154639175 436% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 937.175257732 169% => OK
No of words: 334.0 206.0 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74850299401 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45653528355 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.463917525773 1509% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1735746091 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.49484536082 669% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204277534799 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084000923519 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119733913061 0.0603063233224 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117323868344 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673112810848 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.