Dear John Sullivan,
My name is Sarah Musharaf. I belong to Karachi Pakistan. Basically, I am writing this letter with full of joy. Last week, I read a reader digest on dated 01-04-2018, and i was feeling happy because here were advertise about Spanish teacher job. I really need this job. Even, I have done many Spanish language course because I love to speak and teach Spanish language.
Furthermore, my qualification is fully satisfy your post. However, I would like to mention that I have completed my graduation at Spanish Institute of language and there are many academic subjects who are directly related to Spanish language and I easily translate in to two language such as Urdu and English.
It is my humble request to you, Kindly consider me. I attach my resume along with this letter.
You can contact me on my mobile number 0012345678.
Waiting for your positive response.
Yours Sincerely,
Sarah Musharaf
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... reader digest on dated 01-04-2018, and i was feeling happy because here were adv...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'advertised'.
Suggestion: advertised
...d i was feeling happy because here were advertise about Spanish teacher job. I really nee...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
... Furthermore, my qualification is fully satisfy your post. However, I would like to men...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07741935484 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6614447658 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.8158911026 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5384615385 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237545975672 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626095472457 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646174196488 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897133634623 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086019515969 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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