For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinueyour membership.Write a letter to the club secretary.In your letter state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this give details of how you ha

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For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue

your membership.

Write a letter to the club secretary.

In your letter

 state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this

 give details of how you have benefited from the club

 explain why you want to leave

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to let you know that I intend to terminate my membership next month.

I am a platinum member which, as I am sure you know, entitles me to use your facilities in all

locations across the country. I availed of the offer on your website and paid online with my credit

card at the start of the year.

Since joining your club I have become fitter, happier and more well rounded as a person. The

morning yoga sessions help me to meditate before a busy day at work and I am also able to let

out my aggression on the punching bags in the evening.

Unfortunately, I am unable to continue with my membership because I am going back to live in

Ireland. I looked at your international locations and it looks like Ireland is not one of the

countries you are present in, but if you decide to launch a gym there I would be more than

happy to rejoin.

Many thanks

Chris

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Locations
...tles me to use your facilities in all locations across the country. I availed of the of...
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Suggestion: Card
...ebsite and paid online with my credit card at the start of the year. Since jo...
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Suggestion: Out
...day at work and I am also able to let out my aggression on the punching bags in t...
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Suggestion: Happy
...unch a gym there I would be more than happy to rejoin. Many thanks Chris
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51479289941 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53561170218 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7465640125 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193091962762 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741443946078 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057150771615 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704168987985 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680524119633 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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