For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue
your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary.
In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
give details of how you have benefited from the club
explain why you want to leave
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to let you know that I intend to terminate my membership next month.
I am a platinum member which, as I am sure you know, entitles me to use your facilities in all
locations across the country. I availed of the offer on your website and paid online with my credit
card at the start of the year.
Since joining your club I have become fitter, happier and more well rounded as a person. The
morning yoga sessions help me to meditate before a busy day at work and I am also able to let
out my aggression on the punching bags in the evening.
Unfortunately, I am unable to continue with my membership because I am going back to live in
Ireland. I looked at your international locations and it looks like Ireland is not one of the
countries you are present in, but if you decide to launch a gym there I would be more than
happy to rejoin.
Many thanks
Chris
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| 2019-12-01 | chetan Patthar | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Locations
...tles me to use your facilities in all locations across the country. I availed of the of...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Card
...ebsite and paid online with my credit card at the start of the year. Since jo...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Out
...day at work and I am also able to let out my aggression on the punching bags in t...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Happy
...unch a gym there I would be more than happy to rejoin. Many thanks Chris
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51479289941 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53561170218 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7465640125 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193091962762 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741443946078 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057150771615 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704168987985 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680524119633 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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