People in your area are having problems with their Internet connections.
Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter
1. describe the problems
2. explain how they are affecting people
3. say what the company should do to help
You don't need to write any address.
Dear Sir,
my name is James Bond, residing at 5, Adones street, Magodo. And I am writing to tell you of the lack of internet connection in my area for the past two weeks.
To explain, On behalf of the residents and 1, we say thank you for the support you have rendered over the years. Your have been ways supportive and willing to help in all situations brought before you.
Unfortunately, the heavy rain last two weeks led to the destruction of the network mask and the connecting cables on our street. Also, the children in the neighbourhood have been unable to use the internet to carry out research on assignments given to them from the school.
Based on the forgoing, I would appreciate if these challenges are promptly resolved by changing the wires and bringing a stronger mask to my area.
I look forward to a favourable response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Carol mask.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse from you soon. Yours faithfully, Carol mask.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70700636943 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67318701944 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68152866242 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.65175057 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957387124395 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400777799927 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343248472466 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0371703010361 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314324351317 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.