Good afternoon Sir,
My name is Anitha K. I am living at 248/7 Payakaraopeta Vizag. I am wiriting this letter to you as there is some issues we are facing with your organizarion's data connection.
I would like to bring in notice that its the age of technology and speed but in my locality indivisuals are facing so many issues with the data connection speed. Nowadays in every home there are smart televisions, computers and smart phones available and because of your company's data connection is not providing the sufficient speed individuals are unable to complete there assignments, homework and housemakers unable to watch there cooking shows, daily sopas etc. It is also affecting business as businessmen had paid for commercials of there products and it is not watched by anyone. The applications for local transportation not working properly so people can not know the timming or delay in bus arrival and departure.
Hopefully, you understood the difficulty facing by our locality. I am here requesting you to kindly fix the issue with the server data connection to restart the living smoothly.
Thanks & Regards,
Anitha K
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some issues'?
Suggestion: there are some issues
...ag. I am wiriting this letter to you as there is some issues we are facing with your organizarions d...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... I would like to bring in notice that its the age of technology and speed but in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13978494624 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97489663835 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9655117569 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853767377347 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267501954345 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459115900244 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564292701726 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439799171239 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.