Sexual assault or voilation of a female is odious offence. Due to difference of believes and thinking it is a burning issue to take the side, why such offence commited. In further essay we will discuss bith the sides whether it is fault of a female or because of gender gap.
Firstly, we will discuss the different reasons for gender gap. It is completely depend upon the race, culture, country, politics and economic situation. In the countries where the patriarch system works the women is always got dominated. Sometimes there is culture delegated such kind of low feelings for women to treat them as a slave. For example in many small areas where herdsmen uses there wifes as a goods for trade. In Indian women are worship as goddess and in some houses they are source of dowry so nobody wants a girl child. All such issues create a huge gender gap between men and women. In such conditions females are sexually assaulted by mens.
Secondly, sexual voilation is because of distorted thinking of men. The men who does not respect women, having evil feelings for the women or hate in there heart for women because of some reasons commit such kind of offence. Recently in India there was a survey done by Dainik Bhaskar newspaper explains that most of the people commited such crime was unintentionally did all that as they could not control themselves for doing such thing and only 2% crime committed intentionally. Each of the charged felt guilty but 2% were not felt guilty and they are distorted or we can say mentally sick. As per them the women to be used for such voilations only. In this offence they think that women has embark them to commit crime because of her dress or makeup or there hairstyle etc.
Finally in my opinion both the reasons are equally responsible for these odious offences. I thinks in every family the children should taught and learn to respect and women. There should be equal rights for men and women in home as well as in society. The women should also maintain there dignity. To put in a nutshell, there should be manner, respect and support sessions for women organise by schools, colleges and societies also, so that the future generations can eleminated such wierd offences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...easons for gender gap. It is completely depend upon the race, culture, country, politi...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a good' or simply 'goods'?
Suggestion: a good; goods
...reas where herdsmen uses there wifes as a goods for trade. In Indian women are worship ...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...commited such crime was unintentionally did all that as they could not control them...
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Line 5, column 696, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'embarked'.
Suggestion: embarked
... this offence they think that women has embark them to commit crime because of her dre...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ss or makeup or there hairstyle etc. Finally in my opinion both the reasons are equa...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...esponsible for these odious offences. I thinks in every family the children should tau...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
.... To put in a nutshell, there should be manner, respect and support sessions for women...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74677002584 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41374929503 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540051679587 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7943059949 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848789443049 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273777648391 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326433125394 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615096483141 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331879524385 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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