Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the post of local tour guide. I seen and advertisement that this is a weekend job for my hometown Agra.
I have a keen intrest to meet the new people and show to people the beauty of our town, as Taj Mahal is one of the seven wonders of the world and has its historic importance also. Along with this I have a degree in Tourism management from a reputed University and I worked as a guide for one month in my internship.
Finally I feel confident and excited for the opportunity which will provide a new dimension to explore.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerly
Amrit Kour
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
...ply for the post of local tour guide. I seen and advertisement that this is a weeken...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a weekend job for my hometown Agra. I have a keen intrest to meet the new peo...
^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e world and has its historic importance also. Along with this I have a degree in Tou...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...uide for one month in my internship. Finally I feel confident and excited for the op...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 541.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47107438017 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54037810854 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0485478596 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2857142857 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235975551382 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975772789778 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583471986769 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113402048959 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817497165726 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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