The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island, according to a survey of visitors.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts indicate that the most usual things what visitors like about and what people dislike about of Fairmont Island.
40% of tourists in Fairmont claim that their people are charming and sociable, and attractive and spectacular sceneries are worthy of attention for 37% of visitors. Fairmont Island attracts people's attention through also their basic and historic culture with high quality accommodation basides exciting views and indigenous population.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks in Island which people dislike. In particular, the most common disadvantage is high cost of living. Because of this, around half of tourists dissatisfy and anyone can't afford to visit there. And about one-third of people are not satisfied entertainment facilities. The weather can effect guests' mood, so fifth of them don't like atmospheric conditions. 1 in 20 people claim to dislike about food quality.
Overall then, it can be said that the two pie charts suggest Fairmont Island has benefits for tourists but it has also problems which should have solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... half of tourists dissatisfy and anyone cant afford to visit there. And about one-th...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
... half of tourists dissatisfy and anyone cant afford to visit there. And about one-th...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...an effect guests mood, so fifth of them dont like atmospheric conditions. 1 in 20 pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, third, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36686390533 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63253101219 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5672948362 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138463359624 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523319069676 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588070826887 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938629016615 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457517162036 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.