The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts elucidate the water consumption for numerous means in six different areas in the globe.
Overall, the agriculture sector is consuming the largest share of water in all regions except Europe and North America where industrial sector dominates over the others. In all regions except Africa, the utilization of water for domestic purpose is relatively low.
The highest share of water goes to satisfy the agriculture demand, in this regards, Central Asia contributes to 88% followed by Africa consumes 84%, then South East Asia responsible for 81% and lastly, South America uses 71% respectively. While water consumption in industrial countries such as Europe and North America where industrial water consumption contributes to 48% and 32% respectively. The minimum water consumption among different area of the world occurs in Central Asia, where industrial use of water for 5% which twofold percent lower than Africa.
Considering the use of water in domestic sector is low throughout six areas. For example, the domestic water utilization is the highest in South America (19%) and the lowest in Central Asia and South East Asia each accounts for 7% compared to other areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s to satisfy the agriculture demand, in this regards, Central Asia contributes to 88...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, so, then, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35978835979 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74755541829 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8572963567 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.625 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217397451564 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119719853887 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770747211765 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157846779383 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713769016898 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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