On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you want them to do
Dear sir,
I am writing to inform about my cannon camera that I lost during my last holiday trip at Shimla, India. It was black color camera with brown leather belt. Moreover, it has 90 megapixels resolution and 6mm lens in it. Furthermore, it also has 8 GB memory card inside camera to save photos.
During my trip, I and my friend went to coffee shop for relaxation at around 6 PM in the evening. I am sure I had my camera with me at that time. When we left coffee shop and came to our hotel, I realized that I lost my camera somewhere between coffee shop and hotel. I also asked owner of coffee shop regarding my lost camera but he did not find it in a hotel.
Finally, I am entitled to claim regarding my camera as I registered it with your company. It would be great if you send me required documents to fill out and procedure that I need to follow in order to claim it.
I am looking towards to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jitendra Bhadja
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to inform about my cannon c...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'PM'.
Suggestion: PM
... coffee shop for relaxation at around 6 PM in the evening. I am sure I had my camera with me at t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Jitendra Bhadja
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30054644809 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3790394281 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6689310758 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5833333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112015639328 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430170156314 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402769159261 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754541214592 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243180975715 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.