On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them .
Dear Mr. Davari,
After I came back from my holiday, I found some expensive missing items that I could not find anymore. As I have insurance coverage, I would like to explain the matter and ask for repayment.
I have lost my suitcase at the airport containing one brand new AirPod. I bought it the day before, and it was about 120$. The second item was a laptop that I recently bought from my hometown. Of course, I kept my purchase receipt for both items, and I will send them to the company. In addition, my golden necklace was in the case too, since I had to pass the security gate, I had to put it in my case.
Passing through the gates, I was asked to meet an officer to check one of my luggage. I was so nervous that I left my suitcase and other luggage right there. After a few minutes, I came back and did not notice the missing suitcase. I figure out not until when I passed the last gate.
I have gathered my purchase receipt for those electronic devices for repayment. But I don't have any proven evidence to claim about the golden necklace except some photos of mine that I wore. Therefore it would be a relief if this item be considered in the compensation.
I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter
pourya mirzaei
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$120'.
Suggestion: $120
...ght it the day before, and it was about 120$. The second item was a laptop that I re...
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Line 8, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...electronic devices for repayment. But I dont have any proven evidence to claim about...
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Line 8, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...except some photos of mine that I wore. Therefore it would be a relief if this item be co...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41201716738 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4502416182 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.429390593 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841125150099 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285536229642 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344610088531 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501594425453 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318249853551 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.