Recently you read an article in newspaper about your city and found some facts that are wrong. Write a letter to the editor
What article you are writing about
Explain what facts were wrong
Suggest how to fix
Dear sir,
I heartily congratulate your newspaper agency for growing rules in such a short tenure. Unfortunately, I have to reach out to you to point out few errors I acknowledged in your recent article, travel heaven.
I am pointing out the article published on January 9 in their newspaper that was articulated quite well beyond readers imagination. Besides you have written some facts hardly known by indigenous people.
However, the noticeable facts such as founder of city and the number of distinct religions we follow here for quite in accurate. Probably, online sources have erroneous information about our city that is being changed by writers without ringing the core of culture. Being a city do I live, I know how several Pioneer discovered different clues that led to confusion.
You might be wondering the way to fix all these mistakes, I personally recommend you follow books in library that provide available knowledge. Thereafter, you can publish a modified article along with an apology letter to readers who might have got hurt. I believe you would consider my advice. I appreciate you spare time to read my article.
Kind regards,
Anonymous
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| 2023-07-28 | anonymous24 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'readers'' or 'reader's'?
Suggestion: readers'; reader's
... that was articulated quite well beyond readers imagination. Besides you have written s...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... quite well beyond readers imagination. Besides you have written some facts hardly know...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12041884817 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81411542669 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712041884817 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9924316018 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243158416941 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738912575532 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361894852373 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127100866265 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340617064635 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.