Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say– Why do you want to work from home?– Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this application to let you know about my interest to avail the opportunity to work from resident as it’s important for right at this moment. Allow me to explain why I am interest to take this facilities.
Couple of weeks ago, my wife gave birth of a baby and she is still not fit enough to take responsibilities of family matters. Meanwhile, appointing a nurse is very expensive. At the same time, you know the traffic condition in the road is not good as well. As a result, after travelling long time and return to my living place, I fail to provide quality time to my better half, specifically to my child which is unexpected as a father.
If I get the opportunity to work from my home then it is possible to give more effort to tasks as I do not have to waste time on road which will be good for our firm. On the other hand, a tension free working environment will be ensured as I will be able to remain with my family members and do not need to worry about them much. To all these, I just need to have a desktop computer and a modem which is expected to be provided by the office.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...me to explain why I am interest to take this facilities. Couple of weeks ago, my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, then, well, while, you know, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31555555556 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57019574602 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6238859741 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188090297278 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688076801005 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576010337203 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111582815737 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504142259381 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.