You work in a company and recently there has been a computer problem in your office. Write a letter to your manager:
-Introduce yourself
-Describe the problem
-Ask him to take immediate measures in this regard
Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know about a computer software problem that I have experienced two days ago. I am Sharin Stewart, working as a computer assistant at your data express company.
You know all of our company’s computer is running on windows 7. In the last week, we have installed the latest version of Microsoft Office. Though it is said that this software will run smoothly, but it is working properly in the current windows platform. Not only the windows, but also the rams are not supporting the new version of office effectively. I think if this situation continues then it will be a great problem for us.
To get rid of this unwanted situation, I request you to give instruction to upgrade the windows platform. It would be great if more powerful rams are installed. As our company is going to have more new software, in my opinion, we need to consult with computer hardware firm so that, in future, such problems do not occur.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Sharin Stewart
- You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter• Explain why you have moved• Describe the new house• Invite your friend to come and visit 73
- Nowadays news companies spend a lot of money covering international news However local news is more relevant to people s live and should receive more funding To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 68
- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...lt with computer hardware firm so that, in future, such problems do not occur. I look ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sharin Stewart
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, i think, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76243093923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67606424849 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3979973577 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8333333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223020561808 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716126026763 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445063615501 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116282173178 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544539660695 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.