Recommend one of the person whom you know for locality service award in the newspaper who are looking for nominations.

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Recommend one of the person whom you know for locality service award in the newspaper who are looking for nominations.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to give a recommendation for Mr. Amal Silva whom I know for locality work for several years for the award “Sri Lanka Begins”.

Let me explain in more detail. Mr. Amal Silva, a retired public servant who has a reputable service of 25 years, is a well known resident in Badulla. He was the person who took the initiation for several projects which benefited the residents in Badulla greatly including removal of garbage dump in Badulla, construction of the new bus stand to name few. Furthermore, with the support of the provincial council he started a free medical clinic for the elders in 2015 which is now being held annually.

I would be grateful if you could consider him for the mentioned award since this would be a substantial motivation for him to carry out more work of this nature in future.

Looking forward to hearing favorably from you.

Yours faithfully.
Chanaka Perara

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 162, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...m to carry out more work of this nature in future. Looking forward to hearing favorabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95031055901 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83107198042 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2015050472 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340751249506 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925880304968 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099796130942 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185261157977 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976278859722 0.0580467560999 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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