Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree.
Do you agree of disagree?
In the current job market in every country, multifarious professions can be perceived are intended to carry numerous activities. It is commonly thought by some people that people who perform physical work should be given remuneration as same as that is offered to people who possess high level degrees. I completely disagree with this and I will discuss my opinion in this essay.
First and foremost, the graduated people who have obtained degrees from various disciplines have sacrificed their time and money in the process of acquiring the degree. They have already undergone numerous challenges and hindrances in their journey, sacrificed many important things in their life during this period. For an example, I spent all my four years in a hostel during my undergraduate time which deprived me of the time with my loved and family members. Consequently, people who have high degrees must be paid a higher salary.
Additionally, the skills and competencies which can be found in graduated people compared to the people who carry out physical work are of vital importance towards the development of a country. In other words, the graduated people will be able to use their broadened knowledge to instigate new strategies and bring new innovations and people who do physical work are there to execute those plans. If same wages are given to everyone, it would discourage graduates impeding their maximum outcome.
To summarize, some people opine that people who do physical work must get same wages as people who have high degrees. In my opinion, I am completely against this as graduated people have sacrificed many and it would hinder the performance of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, as to, even so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67671094712 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8608075848 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259704492151 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908106684791 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109789015109 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164597107519 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105307109695 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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