In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure could be taken to prevent this?
One of the major alarming issues that prevail in developing countries can be considered as the pollution especially in air and water. This has occured heavily
owing to industrial and construction work perceived in these countries. Necessary actions should be deployed soon in order to curb this and this essay will
discuss them.
Firstly, air contamination happens due to carbon emissions from industrial work in these countries. Even though industrial parks and factories are being
built in a large scale, no country seems to pay an attention to the detrimental effects of them. Tree plantation can be carried out to reduce the harmful effects of these industries with the government support. Furthermore, environmental assessments should be continued of these industries to maintain them in a good standard.
Water pollution is also pervasive in many countries which has raised eyebrows of many. Output water from the industries that are highly toxic are dumped into water resources. As a remedial action, water treatment plants should be established to purify the output water so that the water can be utilised again. Moreover, employees of construction sites and industries should be made aware of the danger that the whole world is experiencing and their knowledge should be increased with regard to this.
In conclusion, water and air pollution is ubiquitous in many developing countries as a result of humans and the preventive actions also lie in their hands. Immediate actions are imperative including tree plantations, environmental assessments of the work, water treatment plants to name a few.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irstly, air contamination happens due to carbon emissions from industrial work in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40711462451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98112818376 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3297917891 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296854320578 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109410301761 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398991256128 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154266724431 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412498960545 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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