All parents want the best opportunity for their children. There are some people who think schools should teach children skills but others think having a huge range of subjects is better for a child's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
All around the world, not matter what the nationality is, parents always seek to offer the best opportunities for their children and they make a tremendous effort towards that. It is thought by some people that schools have the responsibility to teach the children the necessary skills and competencies what is required whereas there are some others who are in the belief of having a wider range of subjects is more suitable for the children. In my opinion, schools should play a vital role
in offering skills to the children.
On the one hand, schools are there to and ought to teach the children skills what is necessary for their future. In addition, children can learn and absorb numerous skills while attending schools including social skills, co-operation with other peers and adults, behavioural skills to name a few. When I was schooling, for an instance, I got the opportunity to acquire different skill which were not offered through books. Hence, attending the school is of vital importance for a child to
gain many skills.
On the other hand, some parents believe that a wider range of subjects offer are well off and deliver a number of skill sets and knowledge to shape children's future. Children will be able to learn theoretical insights into many areas and some would entirely change their future opening various avenues. Furthermore, children have the opportunity to search and go through areas which are discovered in other countries too.
In summary, some parents perceive that schools should teach children what is required to turn out a better person whereas there are others who think having a different varieties of subjects would be more beneficial for them. In my point of view, schools should carry the burden of this since they have many resources to make this realised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'variety'?
Suggestion: variety
...are others who think having a different varieties of subjects would be more beneficial fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01993355482 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58005883041 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2068813428 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477701037666 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173776969398 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926906506197 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266593573941 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758900277181 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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