You are moving with your family to a new city. Write a letter to a housing agent in that city about accommodation. In your letter,
- Explain why and when you are moving
- Describe where you want to live
- State the type of accommodation you require
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to inquire about a temporary accommodation available in Maharagama as I have received a transfer in my work place for two years and I will be moving to Maharagama with my family by the week of July.
Let me explain in detail. Basically, I will be looking for a place near schools as I have two children aged 10 and 8 which I find easy for them. Moreover, a place which has a quick access to transportation would be an added advantage since all of our family members do a lot of travelling. Furthermore, two storey house with vehicle parking would be more convenient for us. Last but no least, a house situated in a friendly and calm neighborhood would be ideal for my school children.
I would be very much appreciated if you could find us a suitable place with the aforementioned particulars.
Looking forward to hearing from you favorably.
Your faithfully,
Tharindu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'quick access'.
Suggestion: quick access
...y for them. Moreover, a place which has a quick access to transportation would be an added adv...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...of travelling. Furthermore, two storey house with vehicle parking would be more conv...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vorably. Your faithfully, Tharindu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72839506173 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99150348923 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7755161835 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133826787322 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611379494019 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451139498407 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095145095961 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365856631681 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.