Some people believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree.
Do you agree of disagree?
In the current job market in every country, multifarious professions can be perceived are intended to carry numerous activities. It is commonly thought by some people that people who perform physical work should be given remuneration as same as that is offered to people who possess high level degrees. I completely disagree with this and I will discuss my opinion in this essay.
First and foremost, the graduated people who have obtained degrees from various disciplines have sacrificed their time and money in the process of acquiring the degree. They have already undergone numerous challenges and hindrances in their journey, sacrificed many important things in their life during this period. For an example, I spent all my four years in a hostel during my undergraduate time which deprived me of the time with my loved and family members. Consequently, people who have high degrees must be paid a higher salary.
Additionally, the skills and competencies which can be found in graduated people compared to the people who carry out physical work are of vital importance towards the development of a country. In other words, the graduated people will be able to use their broadened knowledge to instigate new strategies and bring new innovations and people who do physical work are there to execute those plans. If same wages are given to everyone, it would discourage graduates impeding their maximum outcome.
To summarize, some people opine that people who do physical work must get same wages as people who have high degrees. In my opinion, I am completely against this as graduated people have sacrificed many and it would hinder the performance of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15410958904 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78745034634 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8025095917 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48378010009 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196109740128 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172410397011 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288548204108 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110932956476 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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