Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different views on the notion of whether traditional houses should be build or the latest model houses. Many individuals assert that the houses should be built in traditional old-style give the same look to the locality but others insist on the view that the design of the house should be sole discretion of the owner.
There are a few benefits of building the same houses. The first and foremost advantage is, everyone enjoys the feel of equality as every house would have the same design it will display the same personalities and status. It will become a symbol of unity for a locality or area. Additionally, by asking the people to build the same houses local government act as a deterrent for people from showing their impudent display of wealth.
On the other hand, there are sundry benefits of building houses as per the owner's needs and requirements. To begin with, the houses which look alike lack the character. The house is known as a reflection of the owner’s personality and it is the space which is actually the owner’s space hence, the local government should not pose any restrictions on making any kind of houses. Furthermore, traditional old designs of the houses have become obsolete as they might not possess the new features such as modular kitchen, rooms with attached bathroom. Add on features are, the installation of CCTV cameras and burglar arm can be a challenge in traditionally built homes.
To conclude, it is easy to follow historical and traditional design but I would like to say that people should have a right to make the home as per their own needs and requirements, moreover, it is a reflection of the personality.
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods 73
- You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man 70
- You have just finished your master s degree and need to leave your current part time job to search for full time employment Write a letter to your current employer In your letter explain why you will not be able to pursue a full time job in his her compan 78
- Your friend is coming over to stay with you However you will be away on vacation for a month Write him her a letter and say How to get the keys to your flat How to operate the equipment in the flat and Suggest a few places of interest to visit 84
- You are writing your first letter to a pen pal Describe your previous studies and work experience your current activities hobbies and interests 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87062937063 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75273438226 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 290.88556701 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2238301856 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400551117725 0.216113520407 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139109393981 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962307511253 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23524403577 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104375535652 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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