The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear sir or madam, I write this letter it is due to a problem in our cleaning environment. The problem is collection of rubbish and that was happened for a long time. So, I want to this matter solve as soon as possible. Every single day, everybody doing activities is throwing garbage and we smell bad. But, I find that you take them per a week and pile in one place.
That bad managing system will be effected to our health because many small animal like rats, cockroaches any others. that reasons are animals disturb us, they destroy our properties and bring disease. The system must repair and the service provides different rubbish for every kind.
Managing system must repair and the service provides place garbage which has different type. Type of every rubbish is different such as part of vegetable, plastic, wood, iron, and any other. It will be helped to divide them. Collecting them have to do every day, because many citizen in this place.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...imal like rats, cockroaches any others. that reasons are animals disturb us, they de...
^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
...ting them have to do every day, because many citizen in this place.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7245508982 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3443247604 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6673386988 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182027636461 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652044481877 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639450666948 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121727284495 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415797013378 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...imal like rats, cockroaches any others. that reasons are animals disturb us, they de...
^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
...ting them have to do every day, because many citizen in this place.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7245508982 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3443247604 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6673386988 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.75 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182027636461 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652044481877 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639450666948 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121727284495 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415797013378 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.