A telephone company made a mistake about sending your bill to a wrong address. Write a letter to the account manager to complain and explain
what problem this caused
what do you would like them to do
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to complain about the problems I had to face because your company sent my bill to the wrong address.
Every month I receive my telephone bill in the first week but last month I did not see my bill. After about 10 days a person from the neighbouring block gave me the bill; saying that it had been wrongly delivered at his address. My address is 341 Eastwood Avenue and his addresses 341 Westwood Avenue. The next day I went to pay the bill and I was charged a late fee of rupees 500. I argued a lot but they did not listen and I had to pay the fine.
Sir I request you to refund the amount that I had to pay as fine or adjust it in the next bill because it was not my fault that I was late. If you need any more information from me regarding this matter please feel free to contact me at 984 x***
hoping for a positive response from you regarding this matter!
your faithfully,
Kiran Makkar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rong address. Every month I receive my telephone bill in the first week but ...
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Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se it was not my fault that I was late. If you need any more information from me r...
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Line 13, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ease feel free to contact me at 984 x*** hoping for a positive response from you ...
^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
... feel free to contact me at 984 x*** hoping for a positive response from you regard...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...se from you regarding this matter! your faithfully, Kiran Makkar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26775956284 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21116422174 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8379024933 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189948155475 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821231049802 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861553266628 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138103586704 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108378205782 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.