There have been several complaints about the reception areas where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
1. Describe the complaints that have been made
2. Say why the reception area is important
3. Suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear sir,
I would like to put forward some changes that could reform our reception area which have many criticisms from the customers.
The seating area is the foremost thing that have to be rearranged, as it provides only few seats and the seats need to be refurnished.this is the prime complaint we received about this room. Furthermore, the notice board is not up-to-date,and many complained about this.
As our company have many visitors daily,the visiting room is very important. Moreover,it is the place that visitors could enquire about the company.
I would like to suggest some ideas to improve our reception. first of all the room need to be painted with white and could include some more lighting and ceiling fans, so that visitors will have a good impression at first. The notice board should be updated every day and should include the room numbers of the management trustees.
These are some ways to enhance the reception area.I hope you would consider these suggestions to rebuild our visitors area.
Yours faithfully,
Neenu varghese.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...more, the notice board is not up-to-date,and many complained about this. As our c...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... As our company have many visitors daily,the visiting room is very important. Moreov...
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Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...isiting room is very important. Moreover,it is the place that visitors could enquir...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...st some ideas to improve our reception. first of all the room need to be painted with...
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Line 8, column 235, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'boards'.
Suggestion: boards
... a good impression at first. The notice board should be updated every day and should ...
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Line 10, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...some ways to enhance the reception area.I hope you would consider these suggestio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14367816092 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68348959302 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1693621355 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238734190681 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850026717512 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495533621642 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112404453561 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310020779253 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.