There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which your bus services are being operated in my area. Allow me to elaborate.
Couple of issues I would like to bring up which are cleanliness and punctuality. First of all, for the last couple of weeks I have been observing the cleaning stuff do not perform their duties properly, hence, there are lots of dusts along with other garbage on the seats. Therefore, it is very annoying while travelling to work. Secondly, I start my work at 5:00 A.M in the morning so I have to fetch the H25 bus at 4:30 A.M. Last two weeks has been a disaster for me and I have reached late at my work because the bus did not stop at the designated bus stop.
I trust you can empathize my situation. Thus, I am expecting you to dig deep in to the matters and make sure proper route management is in place. I would also like you to check the CCTV footage in the bus; it will help you to sort out matter quickly.
Expecting your prompt action,
Monowar
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- There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter• describe what the problems are• explain how these problems are 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...rk. Secondly, I start my work at 5:00 A.M in the morning so I have to fetch the H...
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Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Expecting your prompt action, Monowar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30725094296 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7434407375 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170666494642 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506432587104 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579062470388 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103680993427 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502108697715 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.