There is a problem with the road outside of your house.
Write a letter to your local councillor.
In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what the problem is
tell the councillor what you would like to be done
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with a compliant regarding the road in our locality at St.Marks. I am a resident of J 1212 and am one of the thirty others occupying the houses along the St.Marks road, which runs parallel to Broad street. It has become increasingly difficult for us to use the road because of the pot-holes as taking out vehicles has become impossible and we are forced to walk down for our daily chores.
The problem started three weeks back when it was raining continuously for two days on 21st and 22nd of June this month. Because of the uneven road, water got accumulated on the road and first sign of holes were visible. Slowly other pot-holes started appearing everywhere within the next 5 days and since then, we are living a nightmare here. I have neighbors who are old and frail and walking on the road in cold is not an option.
I would request you please intervene and get the road fixed at the earliest. Also, would like to suggest you to monitor the quality of work to avoid repetition of the problem. I have attached a few photographs along with the signatures of other residents as well.
Looking forward to an earliest response from you.
Yours faithfully
Anna Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Marks
...egarding the road in our locality at St.Marks. I am a resident of J 1212 and am one o...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Marks
...thers occupying the houses along the St.Marks road, which runs parallel to Broad stre...
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Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...sidents as well. Looking forward to an earliest response from you. Yours fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66203703704 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53442941823 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643518518519 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5683916353 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163085924295 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061768305916 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532479925875 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086923059196 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476902344062 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.