Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged.
In your letter, you should say:
• Details of how you won the prize
• What the prize you are going to get
• What actions you expect to be taken
My name is Maria Kapadia and I am the winner of the General Knowledge quiz published in your paper on 23rd December 2019. Last week, I received a letter from Mr Shah from your marketing division, acknowledging that I won the contest. In the letter, Mr. Shah has mentioned that I won a gift voucher worth INR 10,000/- valid till 31st December 2020. This voucher can be redeemed in any shopping centre and any part of India and is non-transferable.
I am aware that as per the terms and conditions mentioned, I am supposed to share my identification documents like pan card copy, address proof copy, passport copy and two passport size photographs. I am hereby attaching those required documents along with this letter. I would request your marketing team to courier the gift voucher at my residential address (as per the address proof submitted) as I will be travelling and will not be able to personally collect it from your office.
I would request your marketing team to seal package as confidential when they courier the voucher. Also, if you request the courier firm to handover the voucher only to me. Please ask the courier firm to call me personally, if required.
If I can be of further assistance, please do not hesitate to ask.
- Shopping has become a new favourite pastime for younger generation. Why is this the case? Should we encourage them to develop other hobbies too? 73
- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Adults do less exercise nowadays Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives through sporting events such as the Olympics or the World Cup Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise Discuss both views and s 92
- Some people think that prison sentences should not be used to deal with criminals. Education and skills training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some parents believe that children in their leisure should be involved in educational activities. While others believe it adds to much pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uired documents along with this letter. I would request your marketing team to co...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sonally collect it from your office. I would request your marketing team to se...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83710941185 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3894326282 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102273071987 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391089354374 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297962687852 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054428064931 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205036287028 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.