Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website Include The purpose of the site Your requirements When you will need it Your expectations of payment

Essay topics:

Write a letter to a friend asking for help to build your website. Include
The purpose of the site
Your requirements
When you will need it
Your expectations of payment

Dear Ali,

I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am going to start my own business so, I need your help to develop my company’s website.

As you are aware that I am working in the recruitment department for the past ten years with different employers but now I have decided to run my own consultancy firm. Therefore, I would like your expertise to develop the easy to navigate and eye-catching website to attract qualified candidates to apply for the jobs. The website must have attributes like nationality, qualification, age, skills, experience, and location as this information would help me to match the candidates with the job description provided by the client.

I have a budget of $ 5000, but I could pay up $8000 subject to the quality of the website, and it needs to be ready in next month time as I am currently doing some paperwork, and have a plan to roll out the company in maximum two months’ time.

I look forward to hearing from you soon to discuss in more detail
Your friend,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion provided by the client. I have a budget of $ 5000, but I could pay up 000...
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Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$5000'.
Suggestion: $5000
...d by the client. I have a budget of $ 5000, but I could pay up 000 subject to the ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60106382979 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76130667164 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2692042291 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205280101258 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927483717312 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068351340356 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081887267625 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656926562873 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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