Write a letter to a friend who invited you to meet up but you missed the appointment.
Apologise for not messaging
Explain why you could not go
Suggest another date
Dear Kelly,
I hope this mail find you well. I am writing this letter to express my sincerest apology for not showing up for our date last Friday night.
I am truly sorry that I did not contact you and let you wait disappointed for the whole evening. If fact, although I tried to phone you ahead of this unexpected incident, my phone was out of network and then ran out of battery for the whole day.
On that Friday morning, when I was having breakfast, my cousin called and informed me that our uncle Ben just suffered a serious car accident and he was brought to the hospital in a life-threatening situation. Then, I spent all day in the hospital to take care of him, which made me be unable to attend our meeting.
It would be great if we could re-schedule another date. I will be free this Saturday from 6 p.m. Please let me know if it works for your availability.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Augustine Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60227272727 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56490514018 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.002843058 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221248203035 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867501940723 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730931654935 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126649990145 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778052876963 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.