You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there.
Thank your friend
Describe your watch
Tell them what you want them to do
Dear Jack,
I hope this mail find you well. I am writing to inform you about my misplaced watch that could be left unattended by myself at your house when we celebrated your birthday party last weekend.
Thank you so much for holding that such an amazing party. Not only does it have wonderful food and such an amazing and cozy atmosphere, it also gives us a great opportunity to strengthen our social relationship as you invited all our old high school friends to enjoy.
The watch that I am looking for is from the Rolex brand, very eye-catching with its authentic golden color. One more thing is that my name “Augustine” at the bottom side of it, which makes it distinctive from other watches.
Can you please help me to do a thorough search within all areas in your house, like the center kitchen, living room and around the pool? If you can find it, please give me a phone as soon as possible. I would be more than happy to collect it at the earliest time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Augustine Nguyen
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-16 | Bao Ngoc Nguyen | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64723762364 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2286252975 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313508595491 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106251951736 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768069124812 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149857036071 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954185219298 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.