Write a letter to a friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged
. apologise for damaging the production
.Explain what happened.
.Say how are you doing to fix the issue
Dear Mathew,
How have you been? it has been a long a long time since I last saw you. Do you remember a couple of months back I borrowed this additional camera you had for my vacation to Malaysia?.this camera has been of such a great help all thanks to you, as I took some amazing pictures which I will share with you when I meet you next time. I was particularly impressed with the picture quality and image stabilization, the camera also has a great night vision sensor to protect images from getting spoilt.
However, there was a small issue while I was hiking in Malaysia the camera fell down and the lens broke. I apologize for this incident as I should have been more watchful but you know I am careless sometimes.
I have already shown it to Nikon service centre in Malaysia and they advised to get the lens replaced and it would take around two days to fix this issue thus I will get it fixed here in Malaysia and return it to you the next time I meet you.
best wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, How have you been? it has been a long a ...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mathew, How have you been? it has been a long a long time since I las...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a long'.
Suggestion: a long
...hew, How have you been? it has been a long a long time since I last saw you. Do you remem...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...it to you the next time I meet you. best wishes vinshu
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he next time I meet you. best wishes vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3422459893 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35905864936 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3682281355 44.8134815571 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216400282405 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911084358017 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697036811467 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142572208373 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410272950965 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.