Write a letter to HR department of a company requesting information about a interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter:
Describe the position applied for
Why the interview went well
Why do you need the results.
Dear Sir/Mam
I would like to give a token of appreciation for a recent booking of the party hall at your hotel to celebrate my grandma's 90th birthday, which was held on 13th June - 9:00 p.m.
Firstly, the staff was very friendly and cooperative to stay a bit late for us until the celebration was over. Additionally, they made all arrangements on time without any delay. The hall was perfectly decorated with light theme complimenting the stage.
All the guests enjoyed the cake and the buffet, to my amaze I though at one point of time that it doesn't get out of stock but I was happy to see it wasn't the case. Although, the guests were demanding due to the old age and required special attention, which was addressed properly by the team of hotel.
Special thanks to Sara and Elton. I would highly recommend your restaurant any important events as it is family friendly and a seperate child play area.
Yours truely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... staff was very friendly and cooperative to stay a bit late for us until the cele...
^^
Line 13, column 99, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e I though at one point of time that it doesnt get out of stock but I was happy to see...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... out of stock but I was happy to see it wasnt the case. Although, the guests were dem...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65454545455 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58969590778 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4399794145 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.032283410633 0.216113520407 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0141565712933 0.0766984524023 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198153029703 0.0603063233224 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0174165129125 0.12726935374 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128328537103 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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