Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country.
In the letter, you should:
• include some information about the film
• explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film
• inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film
Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you in best of health. Since you are here in Pakistan from past two months and I observed that you are fond of traveling and food. I would like to invite you at my place to watch a movie which is clearly related to your interest and contains information about beautiful places of theis country.
To tell you more about this film, it is one of the best movies based on some very interesting information regarding cultures, places and food from almost every nook and corner of Pakistan.Not only this, I have arranged a proper multi-media projector along with sound system. As this movie contains some really breathtaking scenes that can best enjoyed on bigger screen with proper sound. At the end to cater your hunger, snacks and beverages will also be available followed by a great BBQ dinner . Hope you will accept this humble invitation and will grace my place by visiting on this weekend at sharp 7:00 PM.
Anxiously waiting to see you at my place.
Yours Truly,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e very interesting information regarding cultures, places and food from almost ev...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...lmost every nook and corner of Pakistan.Not only this, I have arranged a proper mul...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...edia projector along with sound system. As this movie contains some really breatht...
^^
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...available followed by a great BBQ dinner . Hope you will accept this humble invita...
^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to see you at my place. Yours Truly, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6797752809 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40697207285 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3345448149 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245945063621 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986260216425 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06094139923 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151951745069 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828713732781 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.