Dear Kayra,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to remind you about the EDM concert, that I had mentioned earlier, which is going to take place next week.
This concert is going to happen on one of the most popular beach that is Baga beach in Goa on 25th December. As I told you earlier, many national and international DJ's like Alan Walker, Martin Garrix, DJ Chetas and many more are going to perform live. It will be a great opportunity to witness all these legend musician playing live at one place.
As their genre is Electronic Dance music, and you being the biggest fan of their music, I can guarantee you'll have a great time. Apart from that, you yourself are a great guitar player, so there is an open mic competition prior to the start of this concert. So I was thinking it would be a good chance for you to perform in front of such a big crowd.
So, I would really like you to come along with me to this concert. Please consider this invitation and get to me soon.
Best Regards,
Jayraj Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this legend' or 'these legends'?
Suggestion: this legend; these legends
...l be a great opportunity to witness all these legend musician playing live at one place. ...
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Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...est fan of their music, I can guarantee youll have a great time. Apart from that, you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, well, apart from, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37368421053 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24933969997 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7210290562 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5454545455 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339885927764 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107804398814 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703600963532 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199407163767 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488827432712 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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