Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter, to draw your attention towards the detorating condition or roads in our vicinity.
I have observed from last monsoon season, the road in our area are in a quite poor state. Due to this reason our locality faces numerous difficulties and I thought I will share with authority. Due to broken road in every foot distance, traffic jams are very common. It takes many hours to clear jams even during non peak hours. Several occasions, traffic police has to intervene to release the traffic jam. Apart from this regular problem, I also get my vechile damaged as so many pot holes cause severe issue. I have to take it to repair workshop on very regular basis. My expenses in maintaining the car has also increased considerably. These roads also cause pain in my body and regular jerks leads to spin injuries. My wife already has a spinal problem which is related to disc slip if repair work is not done to these road it can lead to a major health problem.
I would like to request you to assign a team, and initiate maintenance work soon. I have read in a recent BBC article that engineers have now found a new way to make road. It is by using plastic with charcoal. This technology, helps to increase the life of road and does not have any effect of rain or intense heat. You can save enormous amount of revenue as the maintenance work on these roads will reduce considerably. You can use this money in other expenses and exchequers money will also be saved. I will eagerly look forward for your urgent action in this regards
Your sincerely,
Wajahat
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter, to draw your a...
^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (BBC) must be used with a third-person verb: 'articles'.
Suggestion: articles
... work soon. I have read in a recent BBC article that engineers have now found a new way...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42176474829 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0865850682 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7222222222 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18163766614 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498801525221 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060666215373 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153099322416 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868797788238 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter, to draw your a...
^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (BBC) must be used with a third-person verb: 'articles'.
Suggestion: articles
... work soon. I have read in a recent BBC article that engineers have now found a new way...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42176474829 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0865850682 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7222222222 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18163766614 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498801525221 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060666215373 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153099322416 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868797788238 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.