Write a letter to local newspaper editor, to inform him that article about city/town you know very well which contains some incorrect information - write how you know that city - what incorrect information article contains - what they should do about that
Dear Sir,
My name is Rahul Krishnan from Thiruvalla, Kerala. I recently came across an article in the special edition of your esteemed newspaper about another city, Kaviyoor, which I know is not correct.
I do not belong to this place, but my in-laws live there and I visit them quite often. In fact, I know it well as my home town. I know every nook and corner of that place, including the historical importance as well of this location.
In the 1st November special edition, the article mentioned as the name of this place was given 500 years back, but actually it was over 5000 years. I read a lot about the history of this place and have a deep understanding of the implication of this name and when this name was given from religious textbooks.
I firmly believe that this may be a printing mistake, but still, I feel you must correct this article and repost it again with the correct information. Your paper has got a lot of circulation so people will get the right information. It also helps to give the younger generation about the cultural and traditional importance of places and name.
Hoping to read the article with the correct information!
Yours faithfully
Rahul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, may, so, still, well, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6985645933 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60254536384 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1218143229 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138331575376 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578860145357 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04984523167 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933490903988 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429959498613 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.