Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding noise from your restaurant. Let me explain you the situation. We are residing next to your restaurant at Buffalo Groove and the noise from your restaurant has become one of the biggest concern nowadays.
We are unable to lead a serene life and it is noisy always. Additionally, my younger sister and myself are not able to cope with academics due to this environment. Lastly my grandparents aged over 70 years are not able to sleep peacefully due to the high volume of songs played there.
I would like to suggest few points to resolve this concern, please arrange to make a separate party hall in the restaurant. Alternatively, try to reorganise the restaurant with better audio systems, acoustics and enhanced infrastructure to withstand the high sound. Please take action at the earliest failing to which will avenue police complaint and we have to deal with this challenge through court. Looking forward for your positive response.
Yours' sincerely,
Chitra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...e to lead a serene life and it is noisy always. Additionally, my younger sister and my...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11695906433 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89373838295 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7508638935 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840602644543 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268233330649 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332111606266 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055647677924 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489913420559 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.